Review: Buying the Virgin - Box Set One by


Print Length: 91 pages
Publisher: Coffee Break Erotica (September 24, 2016)

From Goodreads.com: She Auctioned her Own Virginity 

The penniless Charlotte dreams of a bright future, but she has nothing to sell but herself and her virginity. She chooses to auction both to the highest bidder. 

This is the first episode in a steamy bdsm, menage erotica tale of a virgin and her first time with a mature alpha male billionaire, his friend...... and others. 

Readers of this story will read of a young woman with her Master as he leads her along an erotic trail of adventure and excitement through BDSM, menage and voyeurism. 

Adult content. For mature readers only.



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My Rating: 1 star out of 5
WARNING: Due to explicit sexual content, this story is for mature (18 and over) audiences only. 

This series had such an interesting premise, that I really wanted to like it. I was expecting something well written, well thought out and engaging. What I got was 91 pages that is very close to simply being porn without plot. These aren't books, they aren't even novellas really, more or less a group of serials perhaps? 

Now when I read a novel, you go into it knowing there will be times when you may have to suspend "reality". I went into this story assuming that to be the case given that this woman was literally auctioning off her virginity. However, I find it incredibly hard to believe that Charlotte went from innocent, scared and desperate virgin to full on acting like an experienced professional in the matter of days. Seriously. She goes from losing her v-card to her "master" for the week, to having a threesome the very next night. And on the third night? Gang bang anyone? Anal on the fourth? More threesomes? And of course, Charlotte loved every moment of it because yeah, without her enjoyment there wouldn't have been a story, but this was just too over the top to be anything but ridiculous. 

Overall, I am certain this story will appeal to those who enjoy stories that are more porn without much plot. Fans of well written erotica however may be disappointed. I probably would not give this author another chance. 

DISCLAIMER: I received a complimentary copy of this novel in exchange for my honest review. This has not affected my review in any way. All thoughts and opinions expressed in this review are 100% my own.


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                         Buying the Virgin - Box Set 1 is available from Amazon.com

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